This week I have another poem on my space, written by the beautiful and talented Amays Zing, the blogger of amayszing.com. She had already posted this in there.
A poem about reality.
“People are afraid of themselves, of their own reality; their feelings most of all.”
-Jim Morrison.
Life has a full of dreams.
with the live full of expectations.
We always define the perfect
until one day envy find me.
We afraid about failure
but insecurity hits me.
A dream doesn’t reality through magic.
only it happens in imagination.
I refuse to accept the fact of
Reality in disappointment.
A mirror of reality.
can destroy the equality.
by judgement, anger and selfishness.
I’ve started to paint my own reality.
with the love, joy and acceptance.
It helps me feel to enthusiastic.
Don’t live with the full of lies.
Just to meet your expectations.
We don’t create the fantasy world
to escape the reality.
Reality teaches you to work hard
progress and improvement.
Because life is a unique picture
of reality.
What an interesting poem by Amays Zing. I think many feel insecure and worry about failure.
Love this poem is full of our own reality it’s basically a reality check
That is such a beautiful poem. I love poetry. The written word has a power like nothing else.
Reality teaches you to work hard! Beautiful! Very meaningful poet.
Wow, this poem is really deep. Thank you for sharing it!
It’s nice. Lies shouldn’t be patronized and fear is a torment. We need to accept our realities and deal with them.
A very thought-provoking poem that we can all use to think about our own reality and lives. I suppose our personal interpretation would also change during the various stages in our life, as our reality changes. Love the creativity and talent shared here.
So heart-piercing. I bet many will relate to this. very well done. You will really look into yourself deeper.
This is well-written. I love that you we can all see good things in the reality of life.
Beautiful! I love that you are sharing the poetry of others on your blog.
So beautiful! We are afraid of a lot of things, reality and our feelings especially. Great poem!
Deep yet uplifting poem, and love the imagery that was used. Especially your ending of life being a picture of reality. We sure make sure the picture we paint is a beautiful one.
nice poem. so inspiring
I used to be so insecure of myself and thought that I was not doing a good job raising my children. Well, guess what, I proved myself wrong. All my children are college degree holders, two of which are already gainfully employed. I think it is only your perception of yourself that becomes a hindrance to achieve your dreams.
it’s good that we must find what our insecurities are. the younger we recognize them, the better because we still have time to fix them. when we cant handle them ourselves, our relationships with other people will be affected as well. it’s good to have introspection from time to time.
The poem is real and talks about the bitter truth. To be free we all need to accept the reality, because life is only about reality. We imagine many things while in the house but when we get out, we see the real world, different from our imagination.
Thanks for the reminder poem.
What a lovely poem. Poetry can be such a powerful way to work through the challenges of life, and it is so brave to share that work for others to benefit from x
At times like this it is always nice to read a bit of poetry for sure. thank you so much for this x
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this is such a thought-provoking poem, indeed dream and reality are a part of us
You are very talented poet. That is a very beautiful poem.
That was a nice poem. It reflects well our fear of reality.
Lovely poem! It’s not about a fairy tale, but it shows the harsh reality in life.
What a thoughtful poem. I always wonder if I can accept reality or just live in fantasy. I don’t want to accept reality sometimes because there are many angles or sides of it.
Short but really inspiring poem. Amazing!
wow!! I know Amays & love her poem posted by you here. Just realise her poem writing talent too
cheers, siennylovesdrawing
wow, it’s a beautifully written poem having in-depth meaning. Thanks for sharing!
This is amazing! Thank you for sharing.
Reality does indeed teach you to work hard toward progress and improvement. Great poem!
our mind can be our worst enemy, this poem is very eye-opening
Amays is such a great writer. this is a terrific poem for the times we live in. a mirror of reality. something we could all use.
Beautiful poem, so well written. Keep them coming!
Wow. Great poem. The meaning behind it is truly moving.
This is such a great poem. I really like the words. I always try to be more secure in who I am.
Wow, I didn’t know amays zing was such a poet. Nice work!
Life is what we see in our own reality. That is why it is so vital to be joyous and see the bet in ourselves and people around us.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Keep on creating original poems, maybe one day you can publish it as a book!
Suggestive poem that makes you reflect on our condition, life and dimension.
This is a truly beautiful poem, it really makes you think and inspires you!
Such a wonderful poem! very well written on the subject
Amazing poem which reflect everything in this life and I believe everybody can relate with ease on this. Loved it!
This is a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
A very lovely and beautifully written poem that goes very deep. It is easy to construct in fantasy world of self-denial and not focus on the reality around us.
Beautiful poem, Amayz ing! Nice blog collaboration. 🙂
How I loved reading the poem. It makes me feel like I am in the same situation.
What a very talented and inspiring poem
This is such a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.
I love that Jim Morrison quote. Beautiful poem.
It doesn’t take a rocket scientist to know that this poem was written straight from the heart.
Awesome poem! I think we should accept the things we can’t change failure and all. Failure is lives way of teach us things.
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This is so beautiful my friend, I appreciate you sharing this with us.
Beautiful poem. I will surely visit again
Beautiful poem, so inspiring. THank you for sharing.
what an amazing and lovely poem it is..i just love it..it is so deep touching..
Failure and insecurity is part of growing up but it shouldn’t stop us from facing the reality. Gotta love this poem. It’s beautiful!
The emotions behind this poem are so real. They resonate with any who reads them. This would be great to share with my students.
This is a nice poem. It helps me when I am struggling with my new reality
What an awesome poem. I was able to relate to it. Great writing technique!
This is a really lovely poem which everyone can relate to! Thank you for sharing 🙂
This is so true!!! Conversation is key and not any conversation, truthful conversation…
This poem is so touching. I could absolutely related. Thank you for sharing!
I follow Amays and love her blogs. This poem is really beautiful! 🙂
Such a thought provoking poem. I am no good at trying to analyze it, but I love it.
Beautiful and inspirational poem. Can’t explicate reality and imagination better than that!
Appreciate your showing your vulnerability in what you created.
Mirror of Reality is a beautiful poem, and clearly inspired from true emotions and determination.
Wow my Poetry is here! First of all I would like to thank you Moni for posting my poetry and many people gives me a compliment comment. Poetry is the way to express my feelings. This poetry means a lot to me and to those people who did comment on this blog thank you so much I hope you learned something to my poetry post! Love lots people. Cheers.
P.S Amayszing.
true poetry is the best way to express your those feelings which you can’t directly define to anyone…your poetry is super awesome and much heart touching…loved your thoughts…
What an interesting poem. Amays Zing is very good at poetry.
What a beautiful end. “life is a unique picture of reality.” Thanks for sharing the wonderful piece.
So I’m getting senses with this piece. Waiting for more of this.
Great find in collaboration. Glad to read your beautiful poem.
When you live a life full of lies and fakeness, you will only gain stress and pressure until one day you can’t carry on. Simplicity in life wasn’t bad after all.
Beautifully written. I love reading poems like this 🙂
Louise x
Wow, what a beautiful poem. Thank you so much for sharing 🙂
The poem is real and talks about the bitter truth. I appreciate you sharing this with us.
i like to read this types of thoughts.
This is a very nice poem! It is meaningful and well-thought, I’m impressed 🙂
Very thought provoking. Your poems have made me think highly of your poetic skills.
Beautifully written! Reminding everyone to have a reality check.
What a beautiful poem Moni. And what a great idea to be sharing your friends poetry on your blog. It made my day better. Thank you my dear.
very nice poem,loved reading it
Such an awesome thought provoking poem. I feel very troubled and insecure with downs and failures. Also I think these feelings also depend on which phase you are at and what the situation is.
That is a lovely poem, I know Amays from the blogging groups and her blog. Indeed, we shouldn’t change our worlds for others.
I absolutely love this poem. Its very 8insightful and deep. Some of the topics mentioned is part of growing up.
I didn’t know who Amays Zing is. But I love it when people get creative.
This is such a life-affirming poem. It rings so true to me. Because life is a unique picture of reality. So True!!
The words are so powerful that each line written seems our own story ,loved it.
Best line- Reality is a disappointing.
great poem – the fear of failure is something I can deeply resonate with – blessings!
Wow. Its a beautiful poem i must say.. it has a deep meaning which i feel is very true..
Very nice poem.I did not know Amays is so talented and likes to write poetry. I am very surprised and impressed.
This is such a beautiful poem and it is nice to read at times like this too. thanks for sharing x
Beautiful and perfect for the current times. It’s all about perception!
I do not know Amays but this poem exemplifies her perspective of mind and how she deals with the crude reality of life in a beautiful watmy
Deep poem – It is so important to recognize that we have the ability to create our own reality, just as you reference here. Thank you for sharing!
I feel like I am attracting everything I need right now. I love the words that cope together. Such a beautiful way to finish my day!
Amazing poem. Mirror doesn’t lie, we must be ready for triumph and failure both for our dreams and life to be nurtured well.
The poem is very deep and insightful. In the current times we can relate to it when many are worried about things not going the right way.
Looking by the sheer comments on this post, I am not surprised why people are liking your poem so much … beautiful work yet again! You go, girl 🙂
Nice poem. Reality and disappointment are natural in life but it’s up to use to push past that to the goodness of life and its people.
I love her poems.Amays was born for this.i also follow her blog
what a great idea to be sharing your friends poetry on your blog. It made my day better. Thank you for sharing your deep thought.
Such a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.
Authenticity is a rare character in a world where people want to be admired and liked. Everybody has insecurities, only those that are really brave will admit this to themselves and to others.
Very thoughtful and motivational. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece with us.
Beautiful! “Love joy and acceptance” yes! A life Without judgement of self and others is something we all need to strive for!
Excellent expression and emotions that you show us with this lovely poetry
This is so beautiful and I am saving this post. Thanks so much for making my day.
omg this poem is absolutely beautiful! i love poetry! thank for sharing this amazing piece of art!
Beautiful poem and words. We can relate this poem. Thanks for sharing this poem.
Such an amazing poem. Yes the anger and judgement are the biggest enemy and it can spoil the reality and blind a person.
Very beautiful poem. I love it.
This is such a beautiful poem. It has a deep meaning and can relate to every word. Thanks for sharing
Beautiful poem you shared with us again. Reality teaches us to work hard. Impactful words and nicely penned down.
omg loved this! So nicely written.
These words really shook me from within. How thought provoking and so beautifully written.
Wow this poem is really beautiful… Thank you for sharing it.
Beautiful poem. I relate to being afraid of failure, it’s so hard to open up and be vulnerable.
This was a very interesting poem, well done
Love the poem! I am very glad and happy you posted it and I saw it today
This is a beautiful poem!
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Nice poem. I love the part stressing your intention to paint your reality with the love, joy and acceptance.
This is really nice provoking-poem I’ve read. I relate to being afraid of failure, its so hard to open to someone.
It is a nice poem and the author was able to express her thoughts and feelings through a poem. I always believe failures are lessons we have to learn from. I try to always look for the positive side of everything.