Previously on The Chronicles of Maya: Peace Before The Storm
Maya walked into the restaurant and was surprised to see Zan sitting at the counter. It was an unexpected encounter at an odd time. As Zan noticed Maya, she couldn’t help but notice the dilation of his pupils.
Maya decided to order her takeaway and leave without engaging in any conversation with Zan. However, later that evening, Zan reached out to her and asked if he could come over and introduce her to someone.
Despite her reservations, Maya agreed to the meeting. Zan introduced her to his brother, who appeared to be an introvert. The evening went smoothly, but as they were leaving, Maya had an uneasy feeling that something was not right.
She couldn’t shake the feeling that her intuition was warning her about something.
to be continued…
This seems like a lovely piece, love the suspense.
aw… so surprised to the abrupt halt of the story. cant wait to read the next episode of Maya’s story.
Maya really needs to learn to trust her intuition.
Hopefully Maya follows her intuition. If you have a bad feeling about something, you should be extra cautious.
Oh man, I wonder what Maya will do next!
I hope she’ll not have serious problem with Zan. Waiting for the next episode.
Hope she’ll not have serious problems with Zan. Waiting for the next episode.
I hope she follows her intuition… It felt short! I can’t wait for the next one!
Maya, just be yourself and everything will turn out OK.
keeping us all in suspense. Can’t wait to read more
This is interesting. Can’t wait to read more
So much happening in such a small read! Loved it and want to know more….. will be back!
I can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope she doesn’t ignore her intuition.
Ooooo!! I’m loving this – I didn’t know what to expect but I’m intrigued and looking forward to more
Well, the saga continues, hopefully, this story will have a happy ending for Maya because she seems to be the one who has real beauty deep down.
Oh no, I hope Maya trust her intuition. I can’t wait to hear more.
Cannot WAIT to read the next installment of the story!
unexpected times are always interesting even in real life! Haha! I can feel it!
This is really interesting! Waiting for the next episode.
Finally another bit! Maya needs to trust her gut – tell her that 😉
Short, but to the point and keeps you interested in the story. I’d love to find out what happens next.
So suspenseful! Which is a sign of a good read. Till the next “episode”!
If I’ve learned anything in my life it’s to trust your gut! Intrigued as this story is developing
Lots of unknown and lots of possibilities how this story will unravel.
Love the suspense in just this short little snippet!
I can’t wait to see what happens next. I love following Maya’s story.
I love the suspense of this scene. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
o common why this episode is so short..cant wait for the next post
I believe Maya’s intuition too; I do not trust Zan, and I am worried Maya is going to get very hurt after all of this!
I was reading for a minute and poof.. just like that.. to be continued.. hehe. Can’t wait for the continuation.
Hoping you can give us more in the next piece!
Talk about keeping me in suspense!
is she in trouble with Zan?
I look forward to reading some more 🙂
What a thrill and surprise to read you. Really beautiful!
The last episode left me in suspense. So this is what maya saw? I can’t wait for the next episode.
This is cool love to have a little bit of a story at the time makes me want to come back more often to read the rest.
Yes, Intuition is always on point! Waiting for the continuation…
If she had a bad feeling about him coming over she shouldn’t have let him.
This is a good example of why you should always trust your instincts!
Omg! It’s really nice to find out about this story. Can’t wait to read the next thing to happen.
Very short piece but quite suspenseful as well. I am very curious as to what happens next.
You have this uncanny ability to captivate one with your stories. I’m so waiting to read what happens next 🙂
omg i can’t wait to see what is next coming! Thanks for sharing
Nice cliffhanger. I look forward to reading what happens next.
What was Zan’s reasoning for coming over with his brother?? Obviously she is ignoring him! she left him at the restaurant.
I am loving this series! Can’t wait to read the ending of this story
I enjoyed reading the piece. I can’t wait to check out what will happen next. Thank you for sharing this with us.
I love following this journey. You are a beautiful writer.
Oh I kept scrolling to find more parts. This was full of suspense. Waiting to read the next part
I am so happy with an update but it’s too bad it’s cut so short. I know I am selfish and always want to read about Maya more.
Definitely she will going to feel her intuition. I really can’t wait to know what happened next
Oh no, I feel like Zan is going to do something. Dilated pupils, that set warning flags when I read this piece!
ahhh i cant wait for more. I can not wait to read more about maya!!!! your such a great writer
I feel like this story goes through so many emotional rollercoasters. I really can’t wait to see how all this ends. I hope Maya finds peace!
This surely captivates the attention of the reader and keeps him guessing about what happens next. An interesting piece of fiction.
Somehow I never want this story to end. Coz I feel it a real story, don’t know y. Hope Maya gets her love & be happy.
I have read most of the chapters. You must get it collabarated in a book. Its a nice read.
Oh Maya is still here
Was missing her. I love the way you have created this story. You can probably look at turning it into a movie or something..
I always look forward to reading what Maya will be up to next. I am hoping that she follows her intuition!
I like the suspense here. Nicely written.
This is where it gets interesting. What is the brother angle? I’m guessing that Maya might fall for his brother too
Maya definitely needs to learn to trust her intuition. I am looking forward for the next part.
This is very interesting! Eagerly waiting for the next part ….
This is getting interesting by the day and now I am keen to know what will happen next. The story is going great so far .
Can’t wait to read further, loving the suspense. I play by my intuition for most of teh times, looking forward to see how this pans out for Maya.
Short, crisp yet full of the right sort of suspense. Will be waiting eagerly to know what happens next.
I’m intrigued to know more what happens to Maya after, does she finds love??
That’s an interesting cliff hanger … really looking forward to reading what happens next.
That really builds then leaves the story on a bit of a cliffhanger! Very suspenseful.
Such a gripping series! I love it x