Previously on The Chronicles of Maya: The Other Perspective
Z’s POV
Zan was reminiscing about the first time he saw Maya on the surveillance footage of the restaurant where he worked. A customer had misbehaved with one of the waiters, and Maya had stepped in to defend him. Zan couldn’t stop thinking about her ever since.
Maya was a regular customer at the restaurant, and she would visit on Saturdays and Sundays to work on her laptop and drink coffee. Zan had never spoken to her, but he would often admire her from a distance.
One day, Zan received a friend request from Maya, and he was thrilled to get to know her better. He and his childhood best friend, Anil, went to talk to her the next day, but Anil left early, leaving Zan to speak with Maya on his own. Despite Maya’s reserved nature, Zan enjoyed talking to her and soon became friends with her.
Zan was smitten with Maya’s mesmerizing blue eyes and her infectious smile. Despite his flaws, including his tendency to lie and his short temper, Maya was always there to help him without asking for anything in return. She even helped resolve conflicts between Zan and Anil.
One night, Zan texted Maya to let her know he was going home, and she responded by telling him that she loved him. Zan was taken aback but happy to hear it, yet when he didn’t hear from her for five days, he began to worry that she didn’t feel the same way.
His friend Avishek advised him not to fall in love with Maya, telling him that she was a city girl and that their relationship might only be a passing phase for her. Zan began to doubt his feelings for Maya and wondered if Avishek was right.
Meanwhile, Maya was preparing for a long trip to clear her mind. Zan was left wondering about what the future held for him and Maya, unsure if he should pursue his feelings or let them go.
to be continued…
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Such a heart warming story to read specially on Valentine’s Day. I hope this story ends up with a happily ever after.
I agree. And hope they will have all ended carrying good memories, coz they all deserve it.
Really love this to read. Best one for Valentine’s day. Thanks for sharing
Love is always so complicated. Worth the effort, but definitely complicated.
I think Maya should run fast and far from Zan. A guy who admits he is a compulsive liar and who borrows money without paying it back is not a good choice for a partner!
I completely agree with your comment. Maya can’t “fix” Zan, it’s not her responsibility to.
I knew Zan feel for Maya! I do hope they will be together! Thank you for the update, Moni! Happy Valentine’s Day
Same to you same!
awww! I can’t wait to read the next part
So much mystery and uncertainties on whats next. Thats what is the best thing in this story.
Oh wow, now I am just thinking what will happen next. This was lovely to read.
I really hope there is a happy ending for everyone here. There’s so much drama going on in their lives.
Nothing confuses more than a person both wanting you and not at the same time. I’d love to read this from Maya’s perspective.
Read the early chapters
So he’s truly in love but scared. And so is Maya but she thinks he isn’t in love with her and now she wants to move on… Hmmm.
Waiting for the next climax and the episode. Keep on posting
I am hoping for a happy ending!
I have enjoyed this reading. Love is not always complicated like it seems. But I’m of the opinion that everyone need the happy ending in life. Positivity. – Amalia
That’s really a very beautiful story. I loved reading about it.
Confusion for sure! Why is love always so complicated!
now I really want to know if it is really a phase for Maya, I have a feeling that it is not. There is more to it, I am sure. Maybe I am just hoping, lol? Blessings!
Where is Maya going then? Can’t wait for the next ep!
Love is quite a tricky thing and difficult to understand. What a great story and things are getting interesting.
I loved the way you do the write-up. It brings on so much emotions and create suspense. Can’t wait to know this story end chapter, I hope it ends happily.
A beautiful read for Valentine’s Day. I wish that everyone in this story has a happy ending.
You should put this whole story together and making a book is so engaging!
An awesome read
Oh man, what next!? I’m on the edge of my seat!
Poor Maya. She has such a conflicted range of emotions, and everything is so confusing for her. I really hope she finds a happy ending.
Moni, yet again wonderful episode of Maya’s Chronicles. I absolutely adore the way you spin this fiction. It just piques my curiosity as everytime you end it with so much suspense.
I hope that Z figures out what he wants. I think for a guy it’s about time that he grows up and starts making decisions for himself.
Oh, so this seems to be the special-romantic Valentine chapter?!? I’ve enjoyed it as much as the others 🙂
It’s good to read Zan’s side of the story after reading Maya’s and it seems it was love at first sight.
not to sound cynical, but sadly Maya will realize if you’re not in that “perfect” relationship, Love will always be confusing
Such a good read! I’d love to hear the ending to this, I hope it’s happy for everyone!
I’m definitely intrigued by these characters. I cannot wait to see how the story ends!
This is such a great valentines day read. Would love to hear the ending.
Your writing is so descriptive. I love the way you have portrayed both of the characters of Maya and Zan.
Wait is aways painful. And when it is accompanied with uncertainty then it is killing.
I eagerly wait for each chapter this story. You are weaving so wonderfully keeping the suspense intact.
Zan needs to realize that Maya is important. He will be losing her if he does not wake up.
AHHH why can’t these two just discuss their feelings for each other. I know they need to end up together eventually!
This chronicle is getting more painful to read each time. Sadly it reflects the reality of love within our current society. There should be a technology developed to make us say what we really think and express our emotions too. Thank you for such a good read once again!
Oh gosh, what a love story. These are the stories I like to read. Curious on what happens next!
Your writing is so amazing, I cant get over these every time. I love this so much. can’t wait to see what happens next
This chapter has made me dislike Z even more, and the friend who seems to be twisting Z’s mind. Maya has done enough, and needs to look out for herself, not wait around for someone who isn’t making any effort for her. Everyone is afraid of getting hurt, but he is currently hurting Maya and trying to justify it because HE doesn’t want to get hurt, and that’s just selfish in my eyes. I just don’t think these two are meant to be together!
I hope Maya gets a happy ending. This is a great story to read especially on Valentines day
I am so eager to find out what will happen next. Thanks for sharing this was lovely story.
You should write books and I will write all of them. This is how much I enjoy your writing.
I’m looking forward to the compilation of your posts so that I can get a full grasp of where this story will be heading to.
I feel for her truly. Men are trash. That’s my mantra now lol
What a perfect Valentine’s Day update. I can’t wait to find out if they get together!
I love how Maya is described here. So mesmerizing.
Intriguing story and I would love to know what’s next~!? The pain of waiting for the result is excruciating and I feel for it. – Knycx journeying
Mmmoooonnnniiiiiiiiiiiiii….why do you be like this? Just when the story is bringing such a good vibe, you cut it short!!! (hihi) It hurts a lot!
yeah!! really hoping this will be a happy ending story that I always looking up for your next post. seriously do consider to make it a book ya 😀 cheers, siennylovesdrawing
I hope for a better outcome. Love can be complicated or complex. It can be be confusing too. I hope for the best.
Oh this is so complicated and mysterious, I love it!
I think Zan is just using Maya for something, because Maya never ask in return. I’m waiting the next chapter…
The good thing about having a surveillance camera is you can stalk someone else. And how funny it is that he used surveillance cameras to see her. Nice one!
Such stories like this are always interesting to read, they are intriguing. I wonder how events will develop further. Can’t wait for the next part.
more characters are coming up,,,things are getting more exciting,,
I really love where this story is headed. It’s been wonderful to follow along.
Great read! I love reading about Maya and Zan.
I feel like May deserves better haha. Maybe I’m just a bit upset coz I have been Maya so many times in the past. I don’t want her to be hurt.
Oh wow!! What suspense 🙂 definitely would wish a happy ending and look forward to the story further on .
Love shouldn’t be so complicated, I think that Zan isn’t the guy for Maya and that she deserves someone who is sure about her as she is about them. But lovely read
Unidentified feeling of love. Zan loves her, but he is not able to understand that feeling. Waiting for your next post …..
I loved reading the story. But I feel Maya should stay away from Zan. Zan might take advantage of her.
He had always taken advantage of her. Please read the previous posts!
I like that Zan is captivated by Maya’s smile and beautiful blue eyes! I am eager to learn if these two will get together!
There is so many things going on. I am gripped! I want more! I can’t wait! Come on Zan – wake up!
I didn’t know that Zan was a country boy haha. I guess I missed some details but good that he think about Maya
Beautiful story – simple yet sweet
Thank you for sharing this story, it gives us all a great perspective on handling a similar situation.
Maya seems like a really great girl! I hope she doesn’t let people take advantage of her in the future.
This is thrilling! I should definitely read the other previous parts. I wonder if Zan truly care for Maya.
The story is getting better and better. Maya is such an awesome character.
Of course, the writer too!
Ooooh! The opposite side of Maya’s situation! Wow. Things lost in translation. Keep it up.
Zan sounds like he is love but is scared. He needs to be true or lose his love forever.
Hmmmm. It drives me crazy…
Such a beautiful story. I can’t wait to see what is going to happen next. Hope everything works out well for Maya.
Another great story!! I love reading these pieces by you.
Zan seems to be a loser. Maya is better off without him Hope it is Anil who is the one she ends up with
This was such a lovely read and looking forward to the next episode. why is love so complicated at times x
It is a beautiful story with a wide range of emotions and hope Maya finds her peace and the story has a happy ending 🙂
Was wanting to know Zan side of the story I hope he follows his heart and doesn’t listen to anybody else.
You should write in wattpad or just make a book and publish it. This is really interesting love stories.
Your writing always makes for a wonderful read! Thanks for sharing these.
I don’t like this round and round stuff. Either Z likes her or doesn’t want to be with her. Her not calling Zan shouldn’t be a reason for him not to “fall in love with her”. Why can’t Z message or call her?
Your posts are getting intense post by post. The previous one and this. Looking forward for the next
Great for the time of year. February and Valentine’s. Nothing like a love story.
Oh I am going to have to go see how this began! I hope however this ends it ends up to a good one – Maya clearing her head could be great!
Poor Maya had better get her happily ever after! I absolutely LOVE to read love stories.
Maya is so interesting,I can wait to know what’s gonna happen next.
You are a wonderful story teller….suspense is killing me but would love to know whats next.
Enjoying reading this story! Looking forward to the next part.
What an amazing story!!! I can’t wait to hear the follow-up, it is great….
I haven’t yet read the previous chapters but even from this one I get the strong feel for the characters. Good job!
Really interesting read. Looking forward to the next
I love reading this story! What happens next??
So timely for love day that just passed! Great read!
I can’t wait to know what will happen to Maya and Zan. Hope we’ll have a happy ending! Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
You are such an amazing story teller. Maya is so interesting character. This was an superb story. Looking forward to read more….
I don’t know why in love people keep waiting ,person to respond and express feeling this really make difference unnecessary. I love this fiction ,waiting for next article
I am so happy to know that down the line Zan also feels for Maya. Seems things are going to sorted very soon. Expecting some happy ending.
love and its complications. It’s tough to confess it as you keep thinking of the other… Beautifully narrated
Now it looks like both Anil & Zan like Maya. What is Zan’s issue BTW….why he is thinking so much if he likes Maya as well.
You are weaving a beautiful story with Maya, Anil n Zen and I am getting really enjoying this series a lot. Waiting to read more.
and the story line keeps getting better and better. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
such a beautiful story..you are great at story telling.. waiting for climax now
hmmmm not that he has admitted that he is a compulsive liar, maybe Maya is better off without him. Honestly, I don’t like bad boys but there are women who seem to fall for these types. Too complicated hehe
Actually confusing, but I feel Anil is messing up. He lied to Maya about Z.
Love the form this story is taking. I hope Maya chooses the person who is right for her.
Such a wonderful story to read around Valentine’s. I hope Maya finds her happily ever after…
Maya, Maya! I really want to know how it goes with them
Your Maya’s chronicles are getting me hooked. I am hoping for the happy ending.
I was waiting for Z’s story. Not surprised that he is confused. Waiting to see how the story unfolds.
Oh wow!! What suspense 🙂 definitely would wish a happy ending and look forward to the story further on .
Zan seems like one confused soul. I love the way you have shaped the story. Each character is gray and one is left wondering what happens next. That is the hallmark of a good writer.
Finally his part of the story! I don’t think it’s okay not to reply and still wait for maya to contact him. Afterall she spoke her heart out. Waiting for next part eagerly!
I think Maya is doing the right thing by going on a long trip to clear her mind. Sometimes all you need is to break free from all the noise and clutter that surrounds us. I don’t think Zan loves Maya.
I am going to take a day off from everything and read all parts of this story.. so so interesting
I knew Zan feel for Maya. I hope they express their feelings to each other . I do hope they will be together.Waiting for next article
Now we know what Zan think about Maya. Story is going on in different direction now. I think Maya and Zan both are confused about each others feelings. Looking forward to read the next part.
This is a story typical of teenagers. Not knowing what they want and not realizing they could be hurting someone coz of it …
Why is it that the city girls are always misunderstood ? City girls also have emotions …. they can also love someone whole heartedly. Being a city girl who was victim of the same, I can completely understand how maya feels.
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Are you planning to compile all these blogs into a book? They are so engaging and interesting.
Okie this again ends in a suspense this week and making me wait for your next post. I hope it’s a happy ending
Now the story is on its edge where we all come to know the end of the story.
I love a great love story – can’t wait to find out what happens next. Maya sounds like the ultimate heartbreaker!
What a great blog to read! I really love it and thanks for sharing!
Oh wow, now I am just thinking what will happen next. This was lovely to read.
Well, I have already read the next segment and commented on it. Good to go back and put more pieces of the story puzzle together!
I love a good story. Love the instant connection that came through between the 2 characters because that depicts real life. That happens. Can’t wait to read the next instalment!
Wow interesting to see things from a different perspective. Loving these installments and shifting emotions as the story unfolds
This post has all I have been looking for concerning this topic. Nice blog post.
Very descriptive article, I liked that a lot. Will there be a part 2?
Their story has been so intriguing. I wonder how it will all end!