Life is like a quiet, safe haven for introverted souls, where speaking up may feel like a distant storm. It’s a journey where sometimes, being heard is a challenge. But as I keep on telling people; life is our canvas, and our voice is a brush; even gentle strokes can create a masterpiece. We should embrace our unique strengths, our deep thoughts, and the beauty of solitude. Life is not just about shouting; it’s also about whispering wisdom to those who listen. We should cherish the moments of quiet reflection, for they can reveal your true power. We may be soft-spoken, but your spirit shines through your actions, kindness, and the beauty of your inner world.
Also Read: Starry Coffee Serenity
I had battled silent depression for several years, I am not good in talking about my inner troubles, yes I can easily tell you my problems in a easy way but I can’t just get into deeper details. I am not the only individual but there are many people like me, I am sure.
Honestly speaking, I have never written anything personal on my blog, I can’t frame words for that. However, I just have a small poem today that I’d like to share. I found it in my diary from 2014.
Beneath the silver moon’s tender gaze,
In a small, sleepy town where time moves slow,
Lived a girl named Lily, shy and quiet,
In a world that often felt too loud and bright.
She roamed through meadows, lost in thought,
Where wildflowers danced and secrets were sought,
Her heart a library of stories untold,
In a world of dreams, she found her gold.
Lily’s days were filled with gentle sighs,
As she watched the clouds paint the skies,
In whispers of wind and rustling leaves,
She found solace in what the world conceives.
Her friends were books with pages worn,
Their tales of courage, love, and morn,
And under the branches of an old oak tree,
She’d read them aloud, feeling wild and free.
The bustling town knew not her name,
But in her heart, she played a different game,
She painted sunsets with dreams in her eyes,
A world of wonder, beneath quiet skies.
In this tranquil haven, she held her sway,
Her dreams like stars that lit her way,
For Lily, the quiet, the dreamy, the sweet,
Found her home in silence, a world complete.
Related: Lost in Procastination
This blog post is part of the blog challenge ‘Blogaberry Dazzle’
hosted by Cindy D’Silva and Noor Anand Chawla in collaboration with Outset Books.
This is such a beautiful poem. Her story is really moving with your word choice. I love it.
The poem is well written & powerful. Sometimes it is tricky to discuss our feelings. I know i struggle with it at times.
I to battle depression for many years. It is so tough to recover from depression.
I really love that poem. I enjoy reading poems, and that one was really good.
What a beautiful poem. Indeed, expressing our emotions through literary means is a different kind of feeling compared to other forms.
It’s amazing what we can find when going through old diaries! I’m not the best at talking about my feelings either, but putting them into poetry form is a great therapy.
I don’t normally like poems, but this one is wonderful. Thanks for the emotional thoughts.
This is a really great read. Can’t wait to share this with my sister she’ll love this for sure!
This is such a nice read. Can’t wait to share this with others.
I am so sorry to hear that you have been struggling with depression. So many people seem to be suffering in silence with this and teh first step towards battling it is seeking help. I hope you can find the strength to do this. The poem has been beautifully written.
So beautifully and stunningly written in some way – some hows incredible words are much more powerful than yelling, you have done a good job .
Very brave of you to share a personal poem here. It’s beautiful and you should keep your voice heard.
Very brave of you! The poem is lovely! We need to talk about and prioritize mental health more. So important!
This was well written and quite moving, you could really feel the emotions behind it. Thank you for sharing this.
Seems like this The Tale of Lily’s Dreams is a great story! I’m interested, I will check this out later!
That was such a beautiful and expressive poem, ambiguous but personal enough for interpretation.
I love your words in the beginning and your poem. I think like Lily we all need more quiet time for self-reflection. And I think it will make our world better.
What a lovely poem. The words are so sweet and comforting…you’re a lovely writer! Thank you for deciding to share your words with us and I hope you continue to do so.
Nnniiiccceeeee….battling depression is sad and something I wouldn’t want anyone to experience. Thank you for these kind words from a monumental year, to me!
What a beautifully written post! Life as a quiet haven for introverts is beautifully depicted here. Embracing our unique strengths, deep thoughts, and the beauty of solitude is a journey worth taking. Your words inspire us to cherish the power of quiet reflection and the profound impact it can have on our lives. Thank you for sharing this wisdom!
This poem sounds interesting, thanks for sharing it with us.
that last line of your poem – simply sums up the whole so well.. and you should write more such posts
I find that the poem has such deep meaning in it. There are times we just want to live in the dream because there is so much happiness and no problems to worry about.
Thank you for sharing this small poem from your diary with us. It is beautifully written and I really enjoyed the soft and gentle feel.
Such a great read and the poem is so beautiful! I am pinning this one to come back to 😉
What a beautifully woven tale! “The Tale of Lily’s Dreams” is a heartwarming poem that resonates with hope and the power of dreams. Thanks for sharing this touching narrative that reminds us to chase our aspirations. Keep spreading the magic!
Thank you for sharing this very personal post. Struggling with depression is very difficult. This poem is very well written!
What a lovely poem about someone who doesn’t fit in well with the busieness of the city life! This is so well written.
I can totally relate to you. I have never written something really personal on my blog too.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
Great job on the poem. I do see the beauty of solitude. I always enjoy and will always cherish a quiet alone time.
That’s a lot of certificates to your credit! Amazing. Loved the poem.
Pingback: Exploring the Mind of Katy Brent: Author of "How to Kill Men and Get Away With It" | With Love Moni
Pingback: Author Corner: Get a booster for midweek Slump, Chit Chat with author Katy Brent – miliswritingdesk
Life is about processing experiences and emotions. In retrospect, it all looks so clear. Depression is a silent setback. But Lily is a strong girl, whio has expressed herself in her gentle sighs. Beautiful poem, Monidipa. Even I prefer to keep personal stuff away from public plarforms, except for a here and there reference. It’s good to keep processing your emotions from time to time though.
The souls that fight depression are brave. It is a tough battle when all seems lost and there seems to be no reason to go on. More power to you Moni !
This a little poem, that talks about the beauty of solitude and the power of dreams is wonderful.
It is not easy to battle depression and come out of it. I have been there and I feel you. I could feel the emotions when you wrote the poem. Hugs to you
This is absolutely beautiful! It’s amazing how you’ve captured the essence of finding solace in simplicity and the beauty of a quiet, dreamy existence. Kudos on sharing this piece, it’s a gem!
That’s awesome, from 2014, that must be a long time ago and great memories to have on dairies. Thank you for sharing!
This poem moved me. Great job capturing the emotions of a quiet life.
This is such a beautiful poem. You have a ton of talent!
This is such a beautiful poem, love it! I actually love this name, Lily ❤️. In my old childhood diary, I also found a few poems, HORRIBLE poems, written by me . I stopped writing poems since the age of 11 !
Your poem is heart-touching. It isn’t easy to know/share our feelings. Wish you the best!
Yes.. many of us are. No matter how extrovert we tend to show others but some emotions are buried deep within we don’t want to disturb it as we are afraid to face it. Your poem on Lily is so beautiful yet so real.
Thank you for sharing the little Moni’s feelings. Its been 39 years of depression now. Right now going through a terrible episode. But I am very vocal and share all about me on my blogs.
I love how the poem highlights the beauty of embracing one’s inner world and finding a sense of completeness in quietude.
Moni Moni Moni… where was the poetess hiding till now? I am absolutely blown over by this poignant piece. This is your best ever work for me.
Lily reminded me of my childhood… i was like her in many ways… i still am! I am feeling a host of emotions right now… can’t even describe in words.
Well, you are a poetrss yourself. And you are good with your words. All thanks to u.
Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt and beautifully penned poem. It’s a poignant reminder of the inner battles many of us face, often silently. Your words resonate with those who may find solace and strength in knowing they are not alone in their struggles. Keep writing and sharing your thoughts; it can be a source of comfort and connection for others.
Such a beautiful poem! Love the words and flow!
I think introverts are deep thinkers….and your poem is a proof of that. It touches the chord and reveals the deeper you. Well, expressed!
To begin with first I will say that my first friend in childhood was Lily. Now we are distant apart but still our soul connects us even today… I think I have not seen her for almost 20 years now but this name LILY is very precious for me. Moni,I am somewhat like you when it comes to sharing the troubles going within. I too faced depression and the reason was something which I never want to talk about in public. But all thanks to my partner who stood beside me strong to give me the needed mental support. I am not too vocal about my personal problems and I just dont like doing that till the time its beyond my tolerance level. So far you too have noticed me in many groups where we both are members, i really talk very less in groups also, I love listening more as I believe it opens up more windows of new thoughts. Where I feel I can add something new in discussion I do. So dont worry Moni… who you are as a person be that, but if anytime you need someone to hear you patiently without stopping you feel free to connect with me. Finally coming to your poetry your art of expressing things always touched me. There is magic in your expressions, you play with words so easily to share your inner feelings and that what keeps you ahead as a creative soul. You are a wonderful person and I admire you. You nailed again with your poetry.
Depression really can be so debilitating! This poem is beautiful, you can feel the emotion.
A beautiful piece, Monidipa. It is not easy to put it out there, to be vulnerable. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hugs!
That’s quite an amazing skill of carefully woven poetry. Lilly seems to be a dreamer. loved the way of writing.
Struggling with depression is more difficult for introverts. You have found an outlet in your poetry. It is really beautiful. Keep writing. God bless you, beta.
I applaud you for being so brave posting that personal poem of yours. I may not truly understand what you’re feeling right now but I hope to remind you that being silent isn’t a problem, we don’t need to be always jolly. Wanting to be alone more isn’t a problem, if that’s where you find your happiness, why not. Being surrounded by a society which fixate in our minds that we need to be this or that certain kind to be happy is a lie. Inner happiness lies on what you feel you need. You don’t need to prove that to others nor need their approval. Just being you is enough.=)
The poem was lovely, the words in the poem felt like water flowing tru a beautiful river. Beautifully written.
Beautiful poem. As always you surprise me the way you write Moni. Putting emotions in words is tough work in terms of poem. I had been such kind of girl. Introvert and happy in my own thoughts. Love your rales and now love your poem too.
This is definitely hidden treasure! I must say that you really found a wonderful poem in your diary.. in fact, you should start digitalising your previous works by publishing them on your blog…
Such a beautiful piece!! It takes a lot of courage to share personal thoughts and open up to the world sharing one’s vulnerable side. so proud of you!!
I’m always inspired by those can write good poems & now you’re one of them. This is so well written, thanks for sharing this. Cheers SiennyLovesDrawing
I too express myself with such poetic compositions, but usually keep it to myself. Good one you shared.
Lily is also me! Beautiful poem – speaks volume of emotions. Thanks for sharing!
A lovely poem… You’ve captured that introvert feeling very well!